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合集:《英语小作文范文参考》

Directions: You are supposed to writing a letter to citizens to propose the ban of smoking in the public places.
You should write about 100 words.
Do not sign your name at the end of letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

高分范文
Dear citizens,
I am writing this letter to you in an effort to urge you to stop smoking in public places as soon as possible.
It’s long been known that smoking endangers everyone’s mental and physical health . Smoking in public not
only harms the smoker’s health but put others at risk .Smoking in public is an uncivilized behavior which should
be banned .It is high time that we should quit smoking in public places .
We can breathe in clean air in public areas so long as smokers drive combined efforts to give up smoking
there .

Yours faithfully
Li Ming
精品译文
亲爱的市民们：
我写这封信的目的是敦促你们尽快停止在公共场所吸烟。
众所周知，吸烟危害每个人的身心健康。在公共场合吸烟不但危害吸烟者本身的健康，同时也把其他人
置于危险的境地。公共场合吸烟是应该被禁止的不文明行为。现在真正到该是禁止公共场合吸烟的时候了。
只要吸烟者共同努力来改掉公共场合吸烟的习惯，我们就能够呼吸到新鲜空气了。
李明敬上
闪光点剖析
1、in an effort to 为了；（替换 in order to 或者 to）
2、urge sb to do sth 敦促某人做某事
eg. We are supposed to urge our central government to enact a range of relevant policies in an effort to crack down
on pirated books.
我们应该敦促中央政府颁布一系列相关政策目的是来打击盗版图书。
3、 mental and physical health 身心健康
4、endanger one's health = harm one's health 危害某人的健康（重点同义替换）
5、put sb at risk 使某人处于危险境地
6、it is high time that 该是......时候了
7、drive combined efforts to do sth 付出共同努力做某事（写作闪光句型）
eg. We are supposed to drive combined efforts to protecting our environment from pollution.
我们应该付出共同努力来保护我们的环境以防污染。