基本概述:祝贺信是一种非常常见的信函,主要是针对某件事情向某人或某个组织发去自己的祝贺。其写
作重点主要在表明祝贺的理由,阐述祝贺的事件。
文章架构:
● 首段:表明写作目的以及表示祝贺
● 主体段落:展开论述事件,赞扬收信人
● 尾段:再次表示祝贺

2011 年考研英语(二)真题
Directions:
Suppose you cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university. Write him/her a letter to
1) congratulate him/her, and
2) give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.
You should write about 100 words on Answer Sheet 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

高分范文:
Dear Li Ming,
Thrilling news came to me that you had been smoothly accepted by the highly prestigious Peking University.
I am writing to convey my hearty congratulations to you.
Since you will step into college this September, I would like to render some advice on how to gear up for
your approaching university life. Firstly, you are advised to sign up for a training course to polish up your oral
English, which will serve you in good stead in various activities. Secondly, you'd better to get involved in some voluntary work during the summer break to sharpen your practical abilities and communication skills.
I was genuinely hoping that everything works well for you in the days ahead. Wish you a splendid and
productive college life.
Yours truly,
Zhang Wei
精品译文:
亲爱的李明:
得知你已经被赫赫有名的北京大学顺利录取,现在写信向你表达我最诚挚的祝贺。
因为你在九月就要入学,我想对于如何准备即将到来的大学生活提供几条建议。首先,建议你报名参
加一个培训班去提升下口语水平,在参加各种活动时会很有好处。其次,你最好在暑假期间参与一些志愿
工作去提高实践能力和交际技能。
真心希望在未来的日子里你一切顺利。祝愿你的大学生活辉煌并丰富多彩。
真诚的,
张伟
闪光点剖析:
1、render v. 提供
2、break n. 假期
3、sharpen v. 提高,改进
4、genuinely adv. 真诚地
5、productive adj. 富有成效的
6、thrilling news 令人激动的消息
7、highly prestigious 赫赫有名的
8、step into college 进入大学
9、gear up for 为...准备
10、sign up for 报名
11、polish up 提高
12、serve in good stead 对某人很有用
13、get involved in 参与
14、in the days ahead 在未来

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