基本概述:道歉信的目的就是针对所犯的错误和失误,向收信人表明歉意,请求对方对自己所犯的过失
表示原谅和谅解。道歉信的写作要表达出道歉的诚意,所以主观原因不能写的太多,应该写的客观可信度
高,语言要简洁,严肃,真诚。
文章架构:
● 首段:表明写作意图
● 主体段落:具体的道歉原因和事件
● 尾段:再次表达歉意,请求谅解或补救措施

2008 年考研英语真题
Directions:
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob,
your landlord there. Write him a letter to
1) make an apology , and
2) suggest a solution.
You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
You do not need to write the address ( 10 points)

高分范文:
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to voice my apologies for forgetting to return to you the music CD you lent me during
my stay in your house. I found it in my luggage after I got home.
Here are my two suggestions to make up for the inconvenience I may have caused you. The first suggestion
is that I will send the CD to you by Express Mail Service. It takes six to ten days before it reaches you. The
second suggestion is that I will give it back to you by myself. I will be on a business trip to Canada next month, so
I can visit you and return the CD. Please let me know which method you would prefer.
I am looking forward to your reply,
Best regards.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
精品译文:
亲爱的鲍勃:
我写信是为了向你道歉。我住在你家的时候你借给我一张音乐 CD,我却忘记把它归还给你, 在我回
家后才发现它在我的行李里。
对于我可能给你造成的不便,我建议两个弥补的办法。第一个建议是我用特快专递把 CD 给你邮寄过
去,只需 6---10 天。第二个建议是我亲自把 CD 还给你。 下个月我将出差去加拿大,可以前去拜访你并交
还给你 CD。请一定告知我你想用哪一种方法。
期待你的回复,
祝好!
李明 敬上
闪光点剖析:
1、I am writing this letter to voice my apologies for sth / doing sth 我写这封信的目的是对于某事表达我的歉意
(道歉信开头常用句型)
2、Here are my two suggestions to make up for the inconvenience I may have caused you. 对于我可能给你造成
的不便,我建议两个弥补的办法。(道歉信在提出弥补方案的时候的常用句型)
3、on a business trip 因公出差
4、I am looking forward to your reply 期待你的回复(道歉信结尾常用句式)

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