基本概述:投诉信的目的是为了让对方了解你所碰到的问题,继而提出你对解决问题的要求与期待。因此
在进行投诉信写作的时候,要特别注意实事求是,要简明扼要,客观,切勿夸大其词,小题大做。投诉信
写作的重点在于三点:第一是对投诉问题的提出,一般是服务的问题或者商品质量的问题;第二是对投
诉的主要理由的陈述;第三点是你对解决问题的方案和提议,甚至是解决问题不利的可能后果。
文章架构:
● 首段:自我介绍+写作目的+引出投诉的内容
● 主体段落:详细说明投诉的具体问题、投诉原因,以及你所期待的解决方案,甚至是解决不利的
可能后果等内容,要注意写作内容要客观、详实
● 尾段:总结内容。期待尽快解决问题并期待尽快的答复。
2013 年考研英语(一)真题
Directions:
Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, inviting his/ her to be a judge for the
upcoming English speech contest.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the e-mail, Use Li Ming instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
高分范文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of the Student Union, I am sending this e-mail to you to invite you to act as our judge of English
speech contest to be held in our university on June 5.
To be more specific , our contest is on the topic of how to embrace tough challenges in this digital era.
During this competition, ten participants will deliver their speeches with respect to this topic.
It is widely acknowledged that you are a top expert in this field, so we sincerely hope that you can accept our
invitation. For further information, please call me at 88888888.
We are looking forward to your reply and arrival.
Yours respectfully
Li Ming.
精品译文:
敬爱的史密斯先生:
我代表学生会给您写这封邮件目的是邀请您担任即将在 6 月 5 日举行的英语演讲比赛的裁判。
具体来说,我们的竞赛的主题是如何在数字时代接受严峻的挑战。在这次比赛中,十名选手将就本话
题发表演讲。
众所周知,你是这个领域的顶级专家,所以我们诚挚希望您能接受我们的邀请。对于进一步的信息,
请给我打电话:88888888.
我们期待您的回复与到来。
李明 敬上
闪光点剖析:
1、on behalf of sb 代表某人;
2、act as 充当;work as / serve as / function as 都可以表达本含义,成为多样化表达的备选短语;
3、to be more specific 具体来说
4、on the topic of 主题是
5、embrace tough challenges 接受严峻的挑战(embrace 原义是拥抱,这里是接受,属于形象化用法考点,
在写作中出现必然是加分亮点)
6、digital era = digital times = digital age 数字时代; 数码时代
7、deliver a speech 发表演讲
8、with respect to 关于(可以作为 about 的同义替换闪光短语)
9、It is widely acknowledged that+句子 众所周知的是
10、top expert 顶级专家(一定要在作文中灵活使用 top 这种小词,地道,高分)
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