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合集:《英语小作文范文参考》

2007 年考研英语真题
Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its services
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “ Li Ming” instead
Do not write the address ( 10 points)

高分范文：（选自教育部考试中心考试分析）
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student in this university who regularly come to the library to spend my spare time. Generally
speaking, the services you offer here is quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.
To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having
class, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind
as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be greatly honored.
I really wish to have a more comfortable library. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you
are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration. Thank you for you time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
精品译文：
尊敬的女士或先生：
我是本校的一名学生，常来图书馆度过闲暇时光。一般来说（总的来说），我有一些建议希望您采纳。
首先，您能否延长阅读时间？因为在白天，大多数学生在上课，因此他们无法来图书馆。其次，书架
上有些书已经过时。如果您能提供诸如最新期刊等书籍，我们将非常感谢。
我十分期待拥有一个更舒适的图书馆。如果您能好好考虑我的建议，我将非常感谢。再次感谢您抽出
时间给予关注。
李明 敬上
闪光点剖析：
1）spend one’s spare time 度过某人的闲暇时光；spare time = leisure time
2）regularly come to the library 经常光顾图书馆，在这个表达中，regularly 的使用非常到位， 具体来说，
在写作中准确恰当使用副词是写作功力的重要体现，也是加分亮点，以后考生可以在写作中注意对副词
的使用。
3）generally speaking 一般来说；总的来说。
4）I have some suggestions for you to adopt 我有一些建议希望您能采纳。本句是建议信的常用固定句式，希
望考生能够熟记并加以背诵，adopt one’s suggestions 采纳某人的建议。
5）第二段中，to begin with , Moreover 这二个连接词的使用使本段具有清晰的层次感，希望考生加以学习。
6）out of date 过时；也可以替换为 out of fashion 或者直接使用前置定语 out-dated books，希望考生注意表达的多样性。
7）we will be greatly honored 我将非常感谢。本句也是感谢信常用句式，希望考生加以背诵。
8）I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration
如果您能好好考虑我的建议，我将非常感谢。建议信尾段常用句式。
9）Thank you for you time and consideration. 再次感谢您抽出时间给予关注。