建议信3

合集:《英语小作文范文参考》

2009 年考研英语真题
Directions:
Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “ White Pollution” is still
going on.
Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to
1) give your opinions briefly , and
2) make two or three suggestions
You should write about 100 words on SNWSER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.
Use “ Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)

高分范文
Dear editor,
I am a sincere reader of your newspaper and I like your discussion of the social problems. Now I want to
give some opinions of myself about the “White Pollution”.
As we know, regulation was made to solve the problem in June 1st of 2008. To my dismay, plastic bags was
used in the supermarket and many other shops freely. I deem that it is imperative that a range of campaigns should
be waged among citizens to minimize the use of plastic bags. Besides , the manufacturers should also be heavily
taxed to control “ White Pollution”.
Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I am looking forward to seeing a couple of new shifts in the
foreseeable future.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
精品译文：
敬爱的编辑：
我是一名贵报的忠实读者并且我喜欢贵报对社会问题的讨论。现在，我想就白色污染问题给出我自己
的见解。
众所周知，2008 年 6 月 1 日，解决这个问题的规章制度已经实施。令我们失望的是，塑料袋仍然在超
市中使用并且一些商铺是免费使用。我认为应该在市民中开展一系列的宣传活动，使塑料袋的使用达到最
小化。除此之外，也应该对制造商征收高额税款来控制白色污染。
感谢您抽出时间阅读来信并且我期待在可预见的未来看到一些新的变化。
李明 敬上
闪光点剖析：
1、sincere reader 重视的读者，也可以使用亮点表达 devoted reader
2、as we know 众所周知；
3、regulation was made to do sth 关注本句型所采用的被动语态。主动语态与被动语态的更替也是加分亮点。
建议考生适当使用被动语态。
4、To my dismay 令我失望的是。也可以采用 to my disappointed
5、it is imperative that ....应该。。。。。。;imperative 是亮点词汇；
6、a range of 一系列；替换平庸表达 a series of ；wage a campaign 发起运动
7、minimize 动词，使最小化；
8、thank you for taking time reading this letter 感谢您抽出时间阅读来信。本句为建议信尾段的固定句式，希
望考生加以背诵。