慰问信

合集:《英语小作文范文参考》

基本概述：慰问信是得知某一不幸的消息向对方写信表示安慰和问候的信件。这类信件的写作重点是：首
先要写清楚消息的来源和事情的基本情况；其次，是表达自己的慰问之情；最后，期待事情的好转。
文章架构：
● 首段：表明消息来源
● 主体段落：表达自己的慰问
● 尾段：希望事情能够尽快好转

典型例题详解：
Directions:
You have just heard your friend Xiao Wang is recovering quickly and will leave the hospital soon. Write him a
letter to him
You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
You do not need to write the address ( 10 points)

【高分作文】
Dear Xiao Wang,
I hear you are achieving such a quick recovery that you will soon be discharged from hospital and back with
your family and friends, which will make encouraging news to me. I am now counting the seconds till I see you.
You have been on my mind constantly ever since you were hospitalized. Words cannot express how sorry I was
that you has such a difficult time.
But all that is over now, and you will soon be in good shape. Keep it up, Xiao Wang, and come home real
soon to those who love and miss you.
Wish every wish for your swift recovery!
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【精品译文】
亲爱的小王：
我听说你伤口恢复的很好以至于很快就能出院回到你的家庭和朋友身边，这对我来说是条振奋人心
的消息。我现在迫不及待想见到你。自从你住院以来你一直在我的脑海里。在这段艰苦的日子里，无法用语
言来表达和形容。
但这一切现在已经过去，你很快将以一个很好的形象出现。坚持，小王，很快就回到家里回到想念你
爱你的人的身边。
祝愿早日康复。
李明 敬上
【闪光点剖析】
1、quick recovery 迅速康复
2、be discharged from hospital 出院（经典表达，尤其注意 discharge 的用法）
3、encouraging news 令人振奋的消息；鼓舞人心的消息
4、I am now counting the seconds till I see you.（用来形容急迫见到某人，写作亮点句型）
5、Wish every wish for your swift recovery! 祝愿早日尽快康复（慰问信结尾常用句式）