建议信1

合集:《英语小作文范文参考》

基本概述：建议信主要是向收信人就某一具体问题提出建议或者忠告，通常是写给某个机构或者组织，
目的是为了改善或改进某一项服务提出建议，或者写给某一具体的人士，就某一个计划或者决定提出自
己的建议或者看法。建议信的写作重点和评分重点应该在写信人的具体建议或者忠告。建议信与投诉信还
是有所区别的，特别要注意建议信中的建议或者忠告的语气较为平缓，中肯，措辞要礼貌。
文章架构：
● 首段：自我介绍+写作目的
● 主体段落：提出具体的建议或忠告（以 2—3 条为宜，注意最好首先肯定其成绩或优点，然后再写
需要改进或改善的地方，采用先肯后否的写作策略。
● 尾段：总结建议

2014 年考研英语真题
Directions:
Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’
physical condition.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address.(10 points)

高分范文：
Dear President,
Being a senior student in this university, I am writing this letter with the hope of improving the students’
physical condition, as a growing number of students are getting much fatter, according to the latest survey.
Here are some suggestions I would like to put forward. First of all, greater attention should be attached to the
physical condition of college students, and I hope you could play a vital role in spreading such an idea.
Meanwhile, more sport appraratus and sport fields may be needed, as more students have enrolled in this great
university year by year.
I do hope you can take the above suggestions into consideration and thanks in advance.
Yous,
Li Ming
精品译文
亲爱的校长：
身为本校一名大四学生，我写这封信是希望能改善大学生的身体素质情况，因为根据最新调查，越来
越多的大学生体质却越来越差。
这里，我想提出以下几点建议。首先，学校应该更加注重对大学生身体素质的培养，我希望您能够在
普及这种思想观念方面起到关键作用。同时，我们可能需要更多的运动器材和运动场地，因为每年都会招
收更多的学生入学。
我真的希望您能考虑我提的建议，提前表示感谢。
真挚的，李明
闪光点剖析：
1) with the hope of...希望
2) put forward 提出
3) attach greater attention to...更加注重
4) play a vital role in 起重要作用
5) thanks in advance 提前表示感谢